When
my cousin was young, he was thinking to be a doctor because he likes to help
people and works in hospital. After he graduated, he couldn’t apply to study medicine.
However, he studied mechanical engineering and worked in large company. Now, he
is very successful, and he is making a lot of money. Even though that he is not
very comfortable, he has high reputation, and his family is too happy. Because these
reasons I prefer to work in job
that is boring but has high pay than a fun job with low salary.
The person who makes a lot of money is
always working in high position, so he is successful. People want to be effective
but, you they can have this without some disadvantages. One of them is working always
without a lot of vacation. Also, they should work seriously with less fun. In short,
most the successful people work hard and spend long time in their office.
When I make a lot of money my family
will be happy and proud of my. This is because they will have better life, and I
will bay everything they want. For example, they will have the newest cell
phone and video games. Also, our house will be big and have a lot of entertainment
such as swimming pool. In brief, having a job with high salary will make many
things available for your family and you.
Hi ,I like your short story introduction .On the other hand I think you need more specific examples for reasons number one .
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Manal
abadi, man i like your ideas and i totally agree with you. i think that we have the same ideas about making money. if i have the chance to start a business with you i will not hesitate
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ReplyDeleteHi Abo Ebraheem,
ReplyDeleteI really like your comment, and I completely agree with your point of view. Also, I like that you start with a story as a really nice hook.
Best wishes bro:)
I totally agree with your thoughts; however, your introduction story makes your writing enjoyable. your thoughts are great, but think about a man who sacrificed with every thing in order to get this job, and he even sacrificed being in a family, so he doesn't worry about anything. Don't you think that he will have a great life?
ReplyDeleteYes, money becomes very important the older you get and as you start to raise a family. When I was 20, I didn't care about money. When I was 30, I cared very much!
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