Do
you like to buy clean car but the condition of the car and the car engine is
very bad. Also, the owner of the car wants to sell this this car with high
price because it is clean. The brain of the car is like the brain of the human;
it is the significant part. The whole organs are depends on the human brain. Moreover,
wise people do not think about their appearance as they think of their brains and how to develop them. The reputation and wealth are the reasons witch make
me believes that being smart and ugly is better than being stupid and beautiful.
Smart
people always get good reputation and position in their live. They get that in their
schools, universities, or works. In the school and the university, teachers
like smart students because they make the class easier for them. Also, sometime
the teachers depend on them to help their classmates. For example, when there
is a discussion group, the teacher distributes the smart students with the
students who have straggles. In the work, every company wants to hire smart
people because they do the work perfectly. Moreover, they often bring new ideas
which make the works better, so they get upgrades. In short, you will get the
high reputation if you are smart even though if you are ugly.
Rich
are smart because they know how to make money. They exploited their
intelligence and put their plans. Therefore, their businesses become successful.
For instance, you will not success in your business if you are stupid and do
not have plans. Also, when you have money you can change many things, so you
can make facelift if you are ugly. However, smart people do not think about
this because they believe it is not important thing. In brief, getting money depends
in your intelligent.
In
conclusion, being smart and ugly is more beneficial than being stupid and
beautiful. This in because you cannot get high reputation and make a lot of
money of you are stupid. Also, you can change your appearance but you cannot be
smart if you are stupid.
Very interesting hook! I like the idea the car idea. You considered the reputation and the position as important aspects by repeating them again and again. I like the cosmetic surgical idea even if it seems funny!! great beginning. Good luck :)
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ReplyDeleteI really liked your introduction paragraph; also, I liked the connection between the clean car and the hand some (the pose). Moreover, your comparison between the engine and the brain is completely true and fir. However, I disagree with you when you said Smart people always get good reputation and position in their lives because there are a lot of smart people work in jobs; on the other hand, there are many dumb people who work in high level jobs.
Hello Abdullah,
ReplyDeleteI agree with what you wrote about. It's better to be smart and you can make facelift if you were rich and of course if you first smart.
Nice job.
Really nice introduction with the car analogy. I like the philosophy of if you are smart, you are smart enough to realize that looks aren[t important anyway. Other students say that they will use the money they get from being smart to get plastic surgery, but you point out that the truly smart person will have no need for it.
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